Fiction

Great review!

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A third nice review. Lee Sweet is herself a published author.

Again, for those for whom this is too blurry, the link:

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Second review.

So far, so good! (This is pretty blurry. To see the original,

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And, speaking of “Papa,” did you ever see such a “Proud Papa” look? But, that’s how I feel. From June 2012, when it sort of announced itself to me, to today, when I get to hold it in my hand for the first time, is not the usual nine months that a prospective father waits, but nine years. But, like a human baby, worth the wait.

 

He hadn’t smoked since he was a kid, but now he wished he had a cigarette. He wished he had a drink. He wasn’t moving, but it felt like he was pacing. “What if they find me guilty?”

“Guilty of what?”

“I don’t know! You’re my representative here. Don’t you know?”

“Do you remember, when you were first coming out of your confusion, I told you we couldn’t discuss what comes next until your trial ended? The situation isn’t any different. It isn’t over till the jury comes back.”

“And you can’t tell me anything about anything.”

“I suppose we can talk about this: What did you learn?”

“It hasn’t organized itself. I guess I won’t know until I think about it.”

“That’s probably what’s holding up the jury. Maybe they’re waiting for you to decide what it all means.”

“Is that what you think?”

“So what did you learn?”

.2.

Mary, and Pauline, and his mother. Funny that they would sort of clump together in his mind like that.

Dad. Grandfather Hemingway.

Skiing in Austria. Spain. Good old Karl Thompson, out in Africa, embarrassed about bringing in better heads, and he couldn’t stop from competing even with him. Why was it that he had to compete all the time?

He’d pushed away his early Paris friends, nearly every one. Why was that? Gertrude and Scott and the Murphys and even Archie MacLeish. Dos and Katy and his sister Carol, and what was he trying to be, anyway, papa all the time.

But — Ezra and Joyce and Link Steffens. Max. Coming down with jeeps in ’44 to see if Sylvia was okay, and liberating the rue de l’Odeon.

Putting the words on paper in the early morning heat at the Ambos Mundos in Havana, in the days before Martha found the Finca.

Rene, and Sinsky, and the Black Priest, and Wolfie and Gregorio and Thomason and the embassy and government gasoline.

Hunting in the high country in Wyoming and Montana and Idaho. The Spanish Sierras. Eland and goats and lions in Africa.

China Rot and sixteen kinds of plague, and dysentery on the safari. The snows of Kilimanjaro and Harry Walden.

Mr. Bumby and the Mexican Mouse and Gigi. Did any of them ever know how much he loved them? Why is it that none of them came to testify? Maybe they weren’t asked?

Where were Jane Mason and Ava Gardner and the Kraut? Where were his sisters, and his hero Anson Hemingway in his Civil War uniform, or Uncle Tyley?

One true sentence. The whole thing was so intimidating, but if he could write one true sentence, he could build another on it, and see.

He returned his attention to the defense attorney. “What did I learn? It’s what I said. It’s a good world and you can find good things in it, if you pay your way. But what stays with you as much as anything is how you are with people. Everything else is just furniture.”

“What about craftsmanship? What about competition, and achievement?”

“They’re there too. It’s like when you’re in a great romance, you’re still going to want to enjoy other things. Thank God I had my writing. You have to have that inner world, too. But it’s no life without people.”

The defense attorney smiled. “I think the jury is coming in.”

.2.

“The defendant will rise and face the jury.”

Like making that speech to the writers, all over again.

“Ladies and gentlemen of the jury, have you reached your decision?”

The foreman stood up. “We have, your honor.”

“Then please tell him whatever it is that you have decided to say.” Sensing his surprise, the judge said, “As you were told earlier, Mr. Hemingway, this is not material reality, and so certain features of this trial are different from what you might otherwise expect. You may proceed, Mr. Foreman.”

“Thank you, your honor. Mr. Hemingway, we the jury were tasked with weighing your life in light of the evidence and your testimony and your reactions. It is my charge to present our findings in such a way as to meet your understanding. Nothing here is said in a spirit of condemnation.”

That sure sounds like good news coming!

The foreman was apparently incapable of smiling. “No one enjoys having his life judged by another. These initial remarks were an attempt to relieve your anxiety.”

All right.

“Mr. Hemingway, if we were to put the jury’s opinion in terms of innocence and guilt, we would find you innocent in some respects and guilty in others. But the very idea of guilt and innocence was a problem throughout your life. So was the very idea of judgment. Judgment may imply condemnation or merely discernment. The former meaning, we would suggest, made your life more difficult than it might otherwise have been. Discernment was essential to your task, but the difficulty was to discern clearly. Now, Mr. Hemingway, you are not obliged to accept the jury’s observations or follow the recommendations, but you should bear in mind that this is the most disinterested advice you will ever receive.”

“I understand, and I appreciate it.” Apparently the reassurance was sinking in. He could feel the nervousness abating, replaced mostly by curiosity.

“First observations. You had a most fortunate and productive life. We realize that you think your life was an artistic success and a failure in personal relationships, but we would say that both judgments are too sweeping. Your relationships were not devoid of love, and support, and satisfaction on both sides. Your artistic life was not unaccompanied by traits and incidents that were unfortunate.”

There was a brief pause.

“You see how you were expecting condemnation? No one ever condemned you nearly as continually, habitually, and automatically as you condemned yourself – which of course tempted you to condemn others. So the jury’s first observation is that your perfectionist standards, although they made your great achievement possible, left you in private despair because you could not live up to them.”

True enough.

“But Mr. Hemingway, no one could! The jury’s first recommendation is that you remember, in the future, that ideals cannot be achieved, only lived toward. If in the future you pursue impossibly high ideals, recognize that an ideal that can be attained is not an ideal but a practical goal.”

“And as to my artistic life?”

“Again you are waiting for criticism, perhaps condemnation. But your life was an artistic success. Perhaps your public persona, perhaps even your writing itself, was only a way to bring you unforgettably to the public eye. It has been said more than once in this trial that people came to perceive you as a model of a life lived to the full. That model – even more than the specifics of the things you wrote about, and more than the artistic revolutions you carried out – is the legacy of Ernest Hemingway.”

He felt like laughing. All that work, all that striving, and they were telling him that his career was incidental to the creation of a public persona.

“Your stories and your style of writing, and the attitudes and values you espoused, did affect your times. But a life takes time to be understood, and it is said that a great man’s shadow lengthens with time. You need not fear that you will be forgotten any time soon.”

Well, it would be nice to think that at least some of his work would achieve that. What had he been striving for, after all, but immortality?

“The jury’s second observation, and recommendation, concerns your use of alcohol and other mood-altering substances.” There, for the first time, the foreman showed the ghost of a smile. “We aren’t going to say, `You shouldn’t drink,’ and we aren’t even going to say, `You shouldn’t have drunk so much.’ We do know who we’re talking to! But we would suggest that you consider this. It may be true that alcohol gave you more than it ever took from you, but is it possible that by careful management you could have received more of the benefit and paid less of a price? We mean, specifically, that the essence of your life and work was control, and alcohol loosened that control, over time.”

“I take it you think it hampered my ability to write, but actually I was careful about that.”

“We were thinking more about how it lessened your ability to be you. It is true, you mostly preserved your gift. But, Mr. Hemingway, think back to so much painful testimony from people who cared about you. Did drinking increase your self-control? Did it strengthen you for the trials of life? Did it give you greater patience, more tolerance, fewer causes for remorse?”

“I thought you said you weren’t going to say I shouldn’t have drunk so much.”

“I am saying, on behalf of the jury, that it would have been better if you had been more aware of the effect of too much alcohol over too long a time. We do realize that alcohol can be a valuable resource for a writer, the spark that reminds you of the greater life beyond what is obvious. The sheer number of creative artists who use alcohol testifies to the fact. But can’t a valuable tool be misused, and turned into a detriment?”

“You may not remember how it feels to be trapped. Sometimes in the material world, the only way you can get out of the tyranny of the present moment is a good drink, or more than one.”

“Mr. Hemingway, on behalf of the jury, let me ask a rhetorical question. When you traveled to that other country in your mind, when you spent a morning writing, were you trapped in the tyranny of the present moment?”

“No, I was free, but you couldn’t necessarily call that feeling in whenever you wanted to.”

“But when it wasn’t there and you were writing, you didn’t let yourself turn to drink to get there. So how did you do it?”

He shrugged. “I just kept at it, I guess. I worked at it. You can’t just work only when you feel like it.”

“That is precisely our point. When you had to get to that other place, and you could not do so by using alcohol, you did it by willpower. What might your life have been like if you had done that at other times?”

“But I liked drinking. It was one of the things I enjoyed doing when I wasn’t working.”

“No one is saying there was anything wrong with enjoying yourself. We say, merely, that a good ladder may make an awkward crutch.

“Let us pass on to our third and final set of observations and recommendations. It seemed to us that you were happiest when you trusted in life. We recommend that you cultivate trust. How much good did it ever do you, all that worrying about whether you would be able to succeed, whether you would find love, whether you would retain access to that other dimension where you found your inspiration?”

“It seems to me if I hadn’t done all that worrying, and working, and concentrating and keeping my eye on the ball, my life wouldn’t have been anything like what I was able to make it. I would have wound up a reporter in Kansas City, maybe, or a real estate agent in Chicago.”

“Mr. Hemingway.” There was something faintly reproving in the foreman’s expression. “You have told yourself a story about your life and success, and you have told it to yourself for so long as to accept it as true. Would you now please intend, in the way you have done previously during this trial, and ask for the truth about your life’s success?”

“All right, I’m willing.” He did, and again things changed, and changed in a sudden instant of understanding. “I wasn’t born to fail, was I?”

“No, Mr. Hemingway, you weren’t. No one is, it’s just that different people’s lives are shaped to present different challenges and opportunities.”

“Yeah, I see it. It was up to me, but, I wasn’t ever working alone the way I thought I was.”

“You could choose well or badly, and you could make your road smoother or rougher, but you were fashioned to live the life you led. There wasn’t any reason for you to worry so much.”

“Yeah, but how was I supposed to know that?”

“Who was it who said, `My luck, she is running good’?”

“Sure, and that was right after I was damn near killed.”

“But you believed in your luck, in the same way you believed in your talent. And, you knew things. How could you know things, like knowing that a woman you had just met was going to be your wife?”

“Hadley, you mean.”

“And later Mary. Your life was shot full of luck. You were always in the right place at the right time, and it had nothing to do with planning, calculations, worrying about who was stabbing you in the back or dropping the ball at Scribner’s. Next time, relax a little, and trust more. You can still work just as hard, you just don’t have to think you’re all alone.”

He stood there absorbing the idea.

“And by the way, Mr. Hemingway, on behalf of the entire jury, congratulations. You had a hell of a life.”

.3.

The judge acknowledged the jury foreman with a nod. “The court thanks you for your careful attention and thoughtful consideration.”

“That was it? A few remarks, a little advice?”

“That was it. Did you expect them to find you guilty as charged? Their function was to hear what you made of your life, and tell it to you so that you could hear it. Whether you take advantage of their advice is up to you.”

“Um, your honor, since you bring that up –”

“Of course, Mr. Hemingway. Naturally, you wish to know what is in store for you. I am about to tell you.” The judge’s energy changed, as if until this moment half his mind had been elsewhere. “It should be obvious that there is no reason to offer advice unless you have a future in which you would be able to choose to accept or reject the advice. You live, and you will continue to live, everyone does. But which form of life you choose determines where you go from here.”

“Can we review the options again?”

“Certainly. One, judgment followed by heaven or hell. Two, another immediate 3D life. Three, observing the physical world from here. Four, life centered here without much reference to the 3D world. Five, moving on from here, leaving Earth behind forever.”

“Can we review the options a little slower?”

The judge smiled. “Yes. First option, judgment followed by heaven or hell. Some people cannot accept that their life is over unless they experience judgment and sentencing.”

“You mean they accept being condemned voluntarily?”

“Like you, many people fear being judged, but some prefer that the decision be out of their hands. Since that’s what they will accept, that’s what they get, life after life, until they change their minds.”

“I’ll pass.”

“A second option is another immediate 3D life. Some do that, moving rapidly from one 3D life to another, searching for their ideal of perfection.”

“They reincarnate.”

“You can look at it that way.”

“Do they remember the life they just came out of?”

“Not usually, it would be too confusing. How do you get oriented into one time and place when you are living half in another?”

“So I wouldn’t remember being me?”

“The part of you that was embodied wouldn’t, no. The rest of you would.”

“And presumably that embodied part has experiences and makes decisions, and all of that changes a person. Would it change the rest of me as well?”

“You would find yourself receiving continual feed from the new life; it’s difficult to predict what kind of effect that would have on you.”

“So I might change as the result of choices that are out of my control. Not so sure about this one. And the other choices?”

“A third option is to stay here in the non-physical realm, still oriented to the earth. In other words, you would be aware of 3D life, but would not be subject to being changed by what happens.”

“Watching the party from a knothole in the attic floor, you mean?”

The judge smiled again. “That’s the first time I have heard it put it that way, but yes.”

“I don’t think so. Another option?”

“You could choose to remain in the non-physical, but instead of concentrating on what is gong on in the 3D world, you would spend your time creating whatever you wish to experience.”

“Create just by using my mind, you mean?”

“You envision, you create, and when you wish to alter it, you alter it, just like that.”

“So I create what I want to experience, but if I don’t like what I do, I can rip it up and try again.”

“You continue to create, yes. You create, observe, create some more, for as long as it amuses you.”

“Creation without toil. How did Yeats like that option?”

“If you choose this path, you can ask him yourself.”

“That’s a lot more choice than I thought I was going to have. And what was the last one, again?”

“You could remain in the non-physical but move on to other realms and other ways of being.”

“If I took that one, would I remember who I am?”

“You can’t expect to move to other realms and remain as you are. If you mean, would you still be Ernest Hemingway, the answer is, mostly not.”

He thought about it. “Big decision. Is it ever possible to change your mind and choose another door?”

“Of course. Nothing is satisfactory forever. You can always choose again, right up until you choose to move on to another realm – which will present its own choices, of course..”

“Okay. In that case, it’s easy. I choose creation without toil. As hard as I worked on earth, it’s going to be a pleasure to spend a while creating without all that effort.”

“Very well,” the judge said, “that’s your choice. I can assure you as you begin this next phase of your life, everyone in this courtroom wishes you only the best. And you have my best wishes, as well.” The judge struck the bench with his gavel. “This proceeding is completed, and court is adjourned.”

Nick was still there after the others had disappeared. “Nick, thanks for standing with me. It helped. I wish there was some way I could repay you.”

Nick said, “Who says there isn’t? You can teach me what you know about art. You can teach me to fish.”

He beamed. “It’s a deal. Count on it.”

 

Epilogue

The little boat was pitching in the moderate sea that was running. It was the Gulf Stream as he remembered it, a late summer day as he remembered them. There again was the blue, blue sky, the cumulo-nimbus clouds towering over the purple water. And he was on the Pilar, which was young again as he was young again.

Choose the age you want to be, they had said. Choose where and what and who. Create it as you wish it, or recreate it as it was. Be what you were or what you wanted to be or what you wish you had been. And of course that went for anyone else who came to visit.  Ed Hemingway and he had chosen to be about the same age, and so they were in their mid-thirties together, standing as equals, together in mind and sympathy as they had never been able to stand in physical life.

There would be other days – an endless series of other days, he hoped. He would go out with all the friends who never knew him as he was on the Gulf. Sylvia, for instance: He looked forward to seeing how Sylvia would like the endless sea, the towering unmarked sky. Maybe she would want to fish, maybe she wouldn’t. Either way, they’d have a good time. But this first day had to go to the man who had taught him to fish, all those years ago.

“Got to get Walter and Nita out here again,” he thought, “and Gregorio. Once they’re safely dead, I mean. And meanwhile I’ll have Max, and Mr. Josie, and Charlie, and so many others. God, it’s wonderful! Nobody ever loved the world more than I did, and here it is again.”

He helped get his father strapped into the chair. He got the lines out, baited. His father was holding the unfamiliar deep-sea rod with the confidence of a life-long fisherman, his hawk-sharp eyes filled with anticipation.

“Be ready, dad,” he said. “It’s nothing like trout fishing. We could get a strike at any time, and with any luck at all, one of them might be enormous.”

“But you aren’t determining what or when,” his father said, repeating.

“Nope. It’ll be more fun if we just take what comes.“ He glanced around the cockpit, making sure that everything was as it should be. “It’ll be unpredictable, just the way it was on earth. You’re going to love it.”

Not the end

 

.10.

Away, and back.

“Signing with Scribner’s didn’t put me in the public eye, it just introduced me to the inner circle. Dorothy Thompson, say, Don Stewart. That didn’t make me a household word. And after The Sun Also Rises was published, and my name started getting out there, still that was people talking about the book, really. People had no idea what I looked like, or how I talked, or what I did for fun. You get the distinction?”

“Yes. But then, let me rephrase it. How did you manage the sudden leap into the inner world of published authors?”

“I soaked it up like a desert plant in the rain. I was still only in my twenties, but it seemed to me like I’d been a long time on the outside looking in.”

“And what if that hadn’t happened? Suppose you had signed your contracts, maybe gotten drunk alone, and then had sailed back to Europe? What then? Did you explore that?”

“I did.”

“And?”

“You’re talking about a different life, a different man. The young man that I was then was so tremendously attractive! He lit up a room, and he was able to entirely captivate people when he gave them his full attention. They loved me, couldn’t get enough of me.” A sheepish grin. “Either that, or they couldn’t stand me. But in those days mostly people loved me.”

“All that energy, all that enthusiasm.”

“Sure. It was just like with Ezra or Sylvia, people were delighted to welcome me into their crowd. And, like I say, I was damned glad to be allowed in.”

“So are you telling me no alternative scenario existed? That you were always going to be welcomed gladly into the tent?”

“It isn’t the kind of thing you could get away with saying in life, but yeah, it’s pretty much true. My life was always going to be lived on stage, whether I liked it or not.”

“Even if you hadn’t left Hadley for a rich wife?”

.11.

There was a pause.

“You know, in life, or on earth, or however you’d say it, that would have gotten you a punch in the mouth.”

“I told you before, consciousness here isn’t constricted in time and attention, so there isn’t the pressure that makes things explode. But what about the question? Why not go take a look?”

Away.

And back, not so quickly this time, not so smoothly.

“More complicated than you thought, Mr. Hemingway?”

“Shut up.”

“Does this interfere with the story you got used to telling, Mr. Hemingway?”

“It does.”

“And?”

“You know goddamn well. I’ve been thinking that Pauline broke up my marriage and broke my dream of succeeding as a writer accompanied by my true love and our son.”

“So how do you see it now?”

“Look, I wasn’t wrong. It’s just –.” Nick waited him out. “I never thought, really.”

“Probably worthwhile to spell it out, Mr. Hemingway. It will clarify.”

“Well, Hadley was eight years older than me, I wasn’t making allowances for how much of a strain it was for her to keep up with me. She started getting to be middle-aged after she became a mother. I never realized – Paul Mowrer did, I guess – that Hadley couldn’t keep up with the life I lived. I burned my candle at both ends, and at first, she did too, and thrived on it after all those years of being treated as an invalid. But it was getting to be too much for her. When Pauline didn’t break us up, we went one of two ways. Either Hadley stopped being my playmate, or her health broke down. Neither way were we really happy.”

“Your marriage bonds loosened, shall we say?”

“Having a good time, are you? I was still in love with her. But I was young, I lusted for younger women,

they were available. Is it any big surprise we’d go our separate ways, married or not? But still, leaving Hadley for Pauline broke my life in two. I knew it was a mistake, and it led to so many more mistakes! If I hadn’t left Hadley, my career would have been sounder, better grounded, more human.”

“In what way, Mr. Hemingway?”

“Don’t you already know?”

“I know probabilities, yes. But do I need to keep telling you, it’s in your voicing it that you make it yours. The very talking of it leads to deeper insights. Think about your wives and money, for instance.”

“Well, what about money? The Sun Also Rises was going to bring plenty in royalties, certainly plenty next to what Hadley and I were used to, and it was going to come more predictably than the checks we used to get from the Star. Probably if we had stayed in France we would have moved to a better neighborhood, but we wouldn’t have been moving to the right bank to be with the rich people. But probably we went home in all the versions, sooner or later. France got too expensive, once the franc recovered, and by 1926 I was finished with Europe anyway. I was a long safe way from Oak Park.”

“Long enough that you could have gone back to visit?”

“If I was still married to Hadley? Yes. But in any case, we were coming back to the States.”

“So where did you move to?”

“That seems to depend.”

“New York? Chicago?”

“No, not a big city. Now I needed to live someplace wilder, not so settled, somewhere unspoiled, someplace open and free, where we could hunt and fish. Mostly we went out West – Wyoming, Idaho, Montana.”

“Not Key West?”

“I think Hadley and I could have been happy in Key West, but mostly we lived in the West. Sometimes Hadley and Bumby and I would winter in New Orleans, or Santa Fe, or we’d drop down to Mexico. And of course the life we lived was different from the life I lived with Pauline, because I had Bumby right there, a son to teach things to. That boy certainly did love to fish!”

“But if you never lived in Key West –”

“Then I never wrote To have and Have Not. I never saw Sloppy Joe’s, was never found there by Marty, and so I was never influenced by her urgent politics. I didn’t throw myself into the Loyalist cause, never went to China in ’41, which means I never did any undercover work for the Treasury Department. During the war. And so on. My whole life was different, like I said. I wrote A Farewell to Arms, but it wasn’t exactly the same book. I still had to kill off Katherine, but not by childbirth. I wrote two novels set in the West.”

“So you and Hadley staying married is one decision that did affect everything. I take it you never declared yourself a Catholic.”

“No, and I didn’t spend 20 years in a Catholic Spanish-speaking country. Different life entirely, just like not being wounded in 1918. Not only no Pauline, but no Marty, no Mary, and no going off to the wars, no deep-sea fishing, no Q-Boat.”

“But also no For Whom the Bell Tolls, no Old Man and the Sea.”

“I never said it was all gain, just it was a different life. And this doesn’t even talk about the good sound work I did in that life, or our trips to Spain and France, or the new friends we made and the friends we kept.”

”So let’s stay with what did happen when you broke up with Hadley and married Pauline. Let’s say you moved to Key West. What if your father hadn’t killed himself?”

.12.

It was like a blow to the face. Odd, that.

Nick was watching him closely. “You never did get over it.”

“No, not even now, and it’s strange, you know? You would think it would be different, now I’ve talked to him and seen he’s alive, or as alive as I am, anyway. You’d think it would change how I feel.”

“You might think that, until you realize that once you’re out of the three-dimensional world, we aren’t constricted in the same ways. Instead of thinking of ourselves as one version that changes as we go along, here it’s more like there is a different version of us for every part of our life: There’s a young Hemingway, a teenage Hemingway, and a 60-year-old Hemingway, and all the rest. In 3D, we don’t sort out like that, because we’re in one body that holds it all together. But here, you could meet yourself at different stages, in different years.”

“You make it sound like being dead is going to be fun.”

“It can be, among other things, yes. But you see, you just experienced your feelings around your father’s suicide, and you can see they are as alive as you are. You will find that they are sharper than they were in life. Most things are.”

“And the needle is stuck in the same groove forever?”

“Not quite forever. But you will find it not so easy to change what you feel, what you are, now that you’re out of the crucible that 3D restrictions create. That’s what 3D life is for, changing by choosing. This life is about other things.” He saw that Hemingway had no words ready. He said, “So go. Suppose your father lived to see 1929, and maybe many years thereafter.”

When he returned, Nick said: “Well?”

“I guess Dad killing himself was one of those things that were meant to be, like my getting wounded in 1918. Even when he didn’t kill himself in December, it usually wasn’t much later. He just ran out of road.”

“Like his son?”

“Yeah, like me. Sometimes the Florida real estate mess cleared up, so he wasn’t going broke, but how was he going to get back his health?”

“Again like his son.”

“Yes.”

“Perhaps in ways you still haven’t realized.”

Puzzled: “Such as?”

“In the months before you shot yourself, what was the biggest thing obsessing you, other than your declining health and your inability to write?”

“I’ll be damned! You’re right, I never thought about it. Is that why I was sure I was going broke?”

“You tell me.”

“I will be damned.”

.13.

For  a moment, Nick honored Hemingway’s mood. Then: “It’s hard to watch someone you love and be unable to help in any way. But what about the times when he chose to live instead of die? How did that affect your life?”

“It isn’t so much what it did as what it didn’t do. It didn’t convince me that he was a coward, or that my mother was not only bossy but deadly. It didn’t convince me that that I was going to kill myself.”

“Say all that,” Nick said calmly. “What were the longer-term effects?”

“I didn’t follow it that far,” he said shortly.

“Because –?”

Restlessly: “I don’t know, maybe it didn’t seem worthwhile. I mean, it’s just the path not taken.”

Nick waited him out.

“It made me uncomfortable somehow.” A moment’s brooding. “Somehow it was making me feel guilty, I don’t know why.”

“One more indictment, in a life that had given you plenty of experience with guilt.”

“I guess so.”

“And do you have any real reason to be feeling guilty that your father ran out of road, as you put it?”

“No!” A long hesitation. “Or maybe yes, a little. I could have been a better son. I could have kept in touch. Could at least have let him see his grandson.”

“And would that have saved him, Mr. Hemingway?”

“Everybody’s on his own in life. You can help others only so much.”

“Then is it possible that this is the lesson to be drawn here? That your father killed himself but it wasn’t your fault?”

Stiffly: “I never thought it was.” He faltered. “At least, if I did, I wasn’t aware of it.”

“Of course you weren’t aware of it. That’s the whole point of all this, as I keep telling you. So if you are satisfied, let’s move on.”

“All right. It’s funny, it feels like a knot just got loosened.”

“That’s the hope. Tell me, what if you and Pauline had never settled in Key West?”

.14.

That took a while! Or seemed to, in a realm without any way to measure time. He returned thinking about consequences.

“Surprised, Mr. Hemingway?”

“Yeah, I was. As far as I can tell, moving to Key West was maybe the third most important thing to happen to me, after July 8, 1918 and leaving Hadley for Pauline. So many things hinged on it.”

“And you hadn’t ever suspected?”

“It’s like you say, the farther out you go, the more thoroughly everything changes.”

“What surprised you the most?”

“Well, you know, the first half of my life was so full, I had forgotten that it didn’t include deep-sea fishing. Until Charley Thompson and Joe Russell took me out, all I knew was stream fishing. Now all of a sudden there was this whole new world to learn.”

“And without it?”

“No learning the Gulf Stream. No trips to Cuba with Mister Josie. No Pilar. No articles for Esquire on the great blue river, and I guess no images of Hemingway as deep-sea sports-fisherman, that sold a lot of books. Plus, I wouldn’t have learned about the Keys and the conchs, the real life of a part of America that no one had ever written about.”

“No article for New Masses about the 1935 hurricane.”

“No, and no close-up study of the politics of revolution in Cuba, and no moving to Cuba. So many consequences. I lived in that town a dozen years. It was like looking at my life if I didn’t get wounded in 1918, all those possibilities, but no main pattern I could see.”

“Surely, there must have been something.”

“I don’t know where we would have wound up, but it sure wasn’t going to be Piggott, Arkansas. It wouldn’t have been a big city, either. So maybe, like with Hadley, Pauline and I would have wound up living in the West somewhere. Denver, maybe, who knows? But there just wasn’t a main alternative pattern. Key West was way more important than I had realized, even, because it was a place I could assemble my mob for fishing trips. Can you imagine if I had tried to get Max to visit me in Havana?”

“And even Havana wouldn’t have been in the cards without Key West, would it?”

“No, probably not. I’ll tell you, this one was a surprise. I guess even after the fact, it can be hard to see your life in the right proportions. I hate to admit it, but I’m liking this. Now where?”

“You mentioned Esquire. What if you and Arnold Gingrich hadn’t come to your agreement to write for his new magazine?”

He grinned. “I had to. That’s how I financed the Pilar.”

“Yes, but suppose you hadn’t.”

“We went over this ground in the trial, remember? I said without Pilar, Key West would have become too small for me, and without the safari and without the Esquire articles, my pubic image might not have gotten so out-of-control. Let’s talk about something else.”

“Fine. Then let’s talk about your ‘Panic’ article and its effects, looking at it as the first link in a long chain of events. What might have happened without that first link?”

He considered the question thoughtfully. “Interesting. I never thought to look at it that way. Okay, let’s find out.”

.15.

In a body, he might have been frowning.

“What?”

“Oh, it’s just I was realizing how little I understood of what was going on, what my life was moving toward. You think you’re doing a thing for one reason, and it turns out that you’re doing it for many reasons. And the train you thought was taking you one place was really taking you someplace else entirely. I write an article about what I saw on Matacumbe, and how unnecessary it was, and I send it to New Masses because they want it and they’re the only ones likely to print it. I call it ‘Panic,’ but they, for their own reasons, title it ‘Who killed the vets?’ and of course most people think that’s my title, because most people don’t realize that journalists don’t usually get to write their own headlines.”

“New Masses was using you.”

“I never expected anything else. But what I didn’t think about was the FBI noticing, and even the NKVD. All the political lemmings noticed, of course, all the lefty bandwagon-jumpers. Suddenly they’re all assuming I am something that I am not. So on the one hand I am this pleasure-seeking hard drinking playboy, and now I am also this Johnny-come-lately sympathizer to the leftist cause, finally becoming aware of class warfare. Quite a straddle.”

“So how did your life change if you didn’t write that article?”

“No, you can’t draw straight lines in life the way you’re wanting to. Without the article, the other links in the chain still exist. I was still going to meet Marty and drift leftward. I was still going to cover the Spanish Civil War and get put on Hoover’s watch list. I was still going to come to the attention of the Russians.”

“So this is another of the main lines of your life that aren’t easily deflected?”

“Seems like it. Seems like some things, if you don’t come to them one way, you come to them from another direction.”

“And you examined what happened if you didn’t get put on the FBI’s watch list?”

“I did, and that was very interesting.” Bitterly: “Their vendetta cost me, and it cost the country.”

“Now, you know that isn’t balanced.”

Grudgingly: “Okay, no. It wasn’t the FBI alone, and it wasn’t my article by itself. Anybody who supported the Spanish Loyalists got tarred with the same brush. We called ourselves ‘premature anti-fascists,’ after a while, kind of a bitter joke. We were all considered politically untrustworthy. So, yeah, even without Hoover’s vendetta, maybe I wouldn’t have gotten into the OSS. But it was so stupid! When it came to understanding France, and knowing how to deal with the French, who had more to offer than I did? You’ll notice, they were happy to use me when it came to taking Paris.”

“Colonel Bruce was.”

“And you think he didn’t clear that with his superiors? But it had to be deniable, because I was officially a correspondent, so I had to lie about it and they had to pretend to believe my lies.”

Nick let him brood for a long moment, until he said, “Let’s look at something less depressing.”

“Then why don’t we look at your life if you had worked for OSS instead of pretending to be only a war correspondent?”

He brightened. “Good idea!”

.16.

He returned shaken. “I had no idea!”

“Far-reaching consequences, sometimes. Things you never would have considered. So how did you experience it?”

“Well, in the versions where I had been with the Spanish Loyalists, it wasn’t easy to overcome the suspicion. But my Crook Factory work with Spruill Braden helped, because that was running an intelligence network on nothing, and Braden himself said it was helpful. And I told them about using Pilar as a Q Boat, so they could see I understood the need for discipline. They decided to give me a try and hope for the best. But they were always waiting for me to get the bit in my teeth, so I was careful to keep my head down. They thought I would want to perform feats of derring-do, and they were always waiting for me to suggest it. But hell, my son was in the OSS! He was the right age for parachuting behind enemy lines, I wasn’t.”

“So how did it turn out?”

“Being with the OSS let me do on a large scale what I did on a tiny scale on the road to Paris. I knew France. I knew Europe and Europeans. I knew how to piece together bits of information to make a larger picture. And, if it happened that there was occasion to lead some parties, as might easily have happened, where’s the harm in it? This time, I wasn’t a correspondent, I was part of the army.”

“So what did you find so surprising?”

“I’ll tell you. When I was with the OSS, I wasn’t with Buck Lanham’s bunch, getting shot to pieces in the Hurtgen Forest. So, at the end of the war, no combat fatigue. This time, when I came home from Europe in 1945, I wasn’t dealing with all those emotional time bombs. And I came home honored for my contribution. I’ll bet in a lot of those versions, I am going to keep on going for many more years, just because I didn’t incur the damage I did in real life.”

“Any drawbacks?”

“You’re always going to have drawbacks. I didn’t spend the fall and winter with Buck and the 22nd, for one thing, and I didn’t get any first-hand combat experience, or anyway not much. These were powerful experiences and I would hate to have missed them. But, they didn’t come free.”

“No. So your postwar life was very different?”

“I guess you’d have to say I was different. What with China in 1941, then the Crook Factory and the Q-Boat in 1942-43, then the OSS through the end of the war in Europe, I hadn’t written anything since For Whom the Bell Tolls. But this time I had been doing officially recognized intelligence work. So instead of trying to write a series of novels, I wrote one novel about the Q-Boat and another one set among OSS men in France in 1944. Smaller-scale ambitions than this time, but more likely to be fulfilled.”

“One more what-if. In real life, you got into trouble for supposedly playing war when you weren’t supposed to carry arms. What if instead of lying about what you had done, you had owned up to it?”

“They would have kicked me out of the European Theater. Sent me home. That wouldn’t have been so bad in a way, because what was ever going to be as bloody marvelous as that July, August and September? And I’d still have my memories of my time with the 22nd, and I would have missed Hurtgen Forest and wouldn’t have had any idea how bad it was.

“But, you know, I had to lie about it. Bruce and the OSS and the brass were desperate for me to lie about it. Bruce had given me objectives! The brass knew damned well where some of their intel was coming from, and they were glad to have it, but they had to turn a blind eye. I couldn’t tell the truth without causing them a lot of trouble. So , like I said, I lied and they pretended to believe me. And you know what? I think that’s about as far as I want to go with what-if.”

“You don’t want to look at your postwar life with Mary?”

“I don’t think there would have been a life with Mary. That all hinged on our meeting in London, and if I was with the OSS, I wouldn’t have had  time to kill waiting for the invasion. I would have been up to my eyes with the advance work. But anyway, no, there’s no point.”

“Then let me suggest one last what-if, late in life but important. Those two successive airplane crashes in 1954. You lived the version where the crashes left you badly injured. But there were two other possibilities, either no crash at all or a crash that killed you. What of those two paths? Care to look”

“Yeah, I do, now that you mention it.” Off again.

.17.

And, for the final time, he returned to this no-place, this interruption-without-context.

“You oversimplified. Lots more things could have happened than just the extremes. Let’s say I got killed, either when Roy hit that power line or the next day in the botched takeoff. ‘Dead. Papa killed at 55, still carrying full sail. End of story.’ Would have saved everybody a lot of aggravation.”

“And is that your considered opinion, that it would have saved trouble?”

“After a full seven years of dealing with the effects of those injuries? Yeah, it is. And they were in addition to concussions, and undiagnosed combat fatigue. All that deterioration Hotch was talking about: Could have skipped all of it.”

“It would have made your life a tidier adventure story, certainly. But what about its effect on you, here, as you came over?”

He shrugged. “If you are asking me, would I regret the years I would have missed, what was there to miss? Seven years of progressive loss of control over my own reactions? I could have skipped all that without regret. The other extreme was more interesting. I suppose you already know, without those crashes, chances are I’d still be in 3D, going strong. I always burned my candle at both ends, all my life. I aged quicker than most people. But it was only after the crashes in 1954 that I suddenly began getting old. Continued pain will do that to you, just the pain by itself, not to mention the effects of all the things causing the pain.”

“Or the effects of the ways you may be tempted to self-medicate.”

“Fine. Booze probably didn’t help. But what else did I have? Anyway, without those injuries, I don’t know how my life ends, but I don’t think it’s over yet. Nothing was going to bring back Charlie Scribner and Max Perkins, or the years I lost to politics and warfare, and there wasn’t any way to undo the results of bad decisions,  but the accidents cost the world my second safari book, and I’m sorry about that, because I was doing some good thinking in those African nights. It seems to me I saw a nice companion volume to Green Hills of Africa. Another thing: Without the accidents, I still had time, and I still had the energy, to shape up the two projects I had been juggling since the war. In some versions I did, and in some I didn’t. It’s too bad, because nobody else can finish them for me.

“That second crash cost Mary all that exposed film – hundreds of shots she was planning to use for her article for Life magazine. Cost me my health, cost me several years of good working time. Cost me a place of honor at JFK’s inauguration, when he invited Faulkner and me to represent achievement in American literature. He was a fan, you know, from the time he was a kid.”

“I knew. I wasn’t sure you knew.”

“Oh yes. In good health, I would have enjoyed it..” Briskly: “Enough post mortems. Where do we go from here?”